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Rising crime among teenagers: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 problem and solution essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 309 words
  • Problem and solution
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

In many cities, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is increasing. What are the causes of this, and what can be done to address the problem?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Problem and solution

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Rising youth crime stems from a lack of supervision and opportunity plus peer pressure, and can be addressed through constructive activities and family support.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Many teenagers lack structure outside school, and gangs and social media exploit their desire for status.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Evening youth provision, school mentoring for at-risk pupils and support for struggling families offer the best response.

  • →Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.
  • →Explain how each proposed solution or preventive measure addresses the issue, and who could carry it out.
  • →Separate paragraphs for the issues and responses can make the structure clear; follow every part of the question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model309 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

In many urban areas, a growing share of crime is being committed by teenagers, from shoplifting to street robbery. In my view, the main causes are a lack of supervision and opportunity, together with the influence of peers and social media, and the problem can best be addressed by giving young people constructive alternatives and supporting struggling families.

One major cause is that many teenagers have too little structure in their lives outside school. Where youth clubs and sports facilities have closed and parents work long hours, young people may spend evenings with no adult supervision and little to occupy them. In this situation, minor antisocial behaviour can gradually develop into more serious offending. A second cause is the influence of peers. Teenagers are particularly eager to gain status within a group, and gangs may recruit them by offering money, protection and a sense of belonging. Social media can intensify this pressure, since videos that glamorise violence or easy money circulate quickly among young audiences.

To tackle the problem, local authorities should invest in affordable activities such as sports leagues, music projects and youth centres open in the evenings, which offer both supervision and positive role models. Schools also have an important role: identifying pupils who are frequently absent or excluded, and providing mentoring before they drift into crime, can prevent problems from becoming entrenched. Furthermore, support for families under strain, for instance through parenting programmes or help with housing, can reduce the chaotic home conditions that often lie behind youth offending. Where crimes are committed, early intervention that involves both the young person and their family is likely to be more effective than detention.

In conclusion, rising youth crime reflects a shortage of supervision and opportunity combined with strong peer pressure. Providing constructive activities, early mentoring and family support offers the most promising route to reversing this trend.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: causes and solutions are clearly separated and each solution responds to a cause already explained. The writer uses a wide range of less common vocabulary, such as 'entrenched' and 'glamorise', accurately, and complex sentences are handled with control.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • antisocial behaviour

    actions that harm or upset other people in a community

  • glamorise

    to make something seem more exciting or attractive than it is

  • role models

    people whose behaviour others copy

  • mentoring

    guidance and support given by a more experienced person

  • entrenched

    firmly established and difficult to change

  • early intervention

    action taken at the first signs of a problem

  • detention

    the state of being kept in a secure place as a punishment

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for government, law and crime.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Rising crime among teenagers"?+

Problem and solution. Identify the specific causes, problems or effects asked about in the prompt.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 309 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This essay aims to illustrate Band 8 features: causes and solutions are clearly separated and each solution responds to a cause already explained. The writer uses a wide range of less common vocabulary, such as 'entrenched' and 'glamorise', accurately, and complex sentences are handled with control.

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