Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages

Using fitness trackers and health apps: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 advantages and disadvantages essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 307 words
  • Advantages and disadvantages
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many people now use smartwatches and mobile apps to track their exercise, sleep and diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Advantages and disadvantages

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    For most users, the motivation and awareness that health trackers provide outweigh their drawbacks.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Trackers turn intentions into measurable goals and reveal unhealthy patterns in sleep and diet.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Some users become obsessed with targets, measurements can be inaccurate and personal data may be shared.

  • →Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.
  • →One useful structure is a paragraph for advantages and another for disadvantages, with explanations or examples.
  • →If asked for your opinion or whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, give and support a clear judgement; otherwise summarise both sides.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model307 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Wearable devices and mobile apps now allow people to count their steps, measure their heart rate and record what they eat and how long they sleep. Although these tools have some drawbacks, I believe that for most users the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

The greatest benefit is motivation. Many people intend to exercise more but find it difficult to stay committed. A device that shows the number of steps taken each day, or sends a reminder after an hour of sitting, turns good intentions into measurable goals. For example, someone who notices that they walk very little on working days may start taking the stairs or walking during their lunch break. These tools also increase people's awareness of their health. Tracking sleep can reveal unhealthy patterns, and recording meals can show how much sugar or salt a person consumes without realising it. In some cases, a device that detects an unusual heart rhythm may prompt a user to seek medical advice early.

However, there are disadvantages. Some users become obsessed with the numbers, feeling anxious if they miss a daily target or eating too little in an effort to reach a calorie goal. The measurements are not always accurate either, so people may draw false conclusions about their fitness or sleep. Privacy is another concern, because these devices collect detailed personal data that companies may share with advertisers or insurers.

Despite these risks, the benefits are greater for the majority of users. Most people use trackers in a relaxed way as a source of encouragement, and the privacy risks can be reduced by choosing reputable products and checking data settings carefully.

In conclusion, health-tracking technology can encourage more active and balanced lifestyles. Provided that users treat the data as a guide rather than a strict rule and protect their personal information, its advantages clearly outweigh its disadvantages.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by stating a clear judgement and supporting it with a well-developed paragraph on each side, followed by a short evaluation. Specific examples, such as taking the stairs or detecting an unusual heart rhythm, make the ideas concrete, and the language is precise and natural.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • wearable devices

    small electronic gadgets worn on the body

  • committed

    willing to keep working at something

  • measurable goals

    targets that can be counted or checked

  • heart rhythm

    the regular pattern of a person's heartbeat

  • obsessed

    thinking about something far too much

  • insurers

    companies that sell insurance

  • reputable

    trusted and well thought of

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for health.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Using fitness trackers and health apps"?+

Advantages and disadvantages. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 307 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by stating a clear judgement and supporting it with a well-developed paragraph on each side, followed by a short evaluation. Specific examples, such as taking the stairs or detecting an unusual heart rhythm, make the ideas concrete, and the language is precise and natural.

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