Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages

Longer life expectancy and its effects: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 advantages and disadvantages essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 302 words
  • Advantages and disadvantages
  • Academic
  • 40 minutes

The question

Thanks to advances in medicine, people in many countries are living much longer than in the past. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Advantages and disadvantages

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    Although an ageing population creates financial challenges, the advantages of longer lives clearly outweigh them.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Longer lives mean more years with family, and older people continue to contribute through volunteering and childcare.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Pensions and healthcare become more expensive, and families may struggle to care for elderly relatives.

  • →Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.
  • →One useful structure is a paragraph for advantages and another for disadvantages, with explanations or examples.
  • →If asked for your opinion or whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, give and support a clear judgement; otherwise summarise both sides.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model302 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

Improvements in medicine, nutrition and living conditions mean that many people can now expect to live well into their eighties or beyond. Although an ageing population creates real financial challenges, I believe that the advantages of longer lives clearly outweigh the disadvantages.

The most obvious benefit is for individuals and their families. Longer life gives people more years to enjoy retirement, pursue hobbies and spend time with their grandchildren and even great-grandchildren. Many older people also continue to contribute to society long after they stop working. They volunteer for charities, look after grandchildren while parents work and pass on skills and experience to younger generations. In addition, because medicine has improved, many people now remain healthy and active for much of their later life, so a long life is not necessarily a life of illness.

On the other hand, longer lives place pressure on public finances. As the proportion of older people rises, governments must pay pensions for more years, while there are relatively fewer working-age taxpayers to fund them. Healthcare costs also increase, since elderly people are more likely to suffer from long-term conditions such as heart disease and dementia, which require expensive treatment and care. Families, too, may struggle to look after ageing parents while also working and raising children.

However, these difficulties can be managed through sensible policies. Gradually raising the retirement age in line with life expectancy, encouraging older people who wish to work to continue doing so, and investing in preventive healthcare would ease the financial burden. These are problems of adjustment rather than reasons to regret longer lives.

In conclusion, while increased life expectancy raises the cost of pensions and healthcare, the extra years of life, family time and social contribution it brings are far more valuable, provided that governments plan carefully for an older population.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by giving a clear judgement and supporting it with balanced paragraphs on benefits and costs. The fourth paragraph explains why the disadvantages are manageable, which strengthens the task response, and the vocabulary of demographics and public finance is used precisely.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • ageing population

    a population in which the share of older people is growing

  • retirement

    the period after a person stops working

  • pensions

    regular payments made to people after they retire

  • working-age

    old enough and young enough to have a job

  • dementia

    a serious illness that affects memory and thinking

  • life expectancy

    the average number of years a person is expected to live

  • preventive healthcare

    medical care that stops illness before it starts

  • adjustment

    a change made so something works better

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for health.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Longer life expectancy and its effects"?+

Advantages and disadvantages. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 302 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by giving a clear judgement and supporting it with balanced paragraphs on benefits and costs. The fourth paragraph explains why the disadvantages are manageable, which strengthens the task response, and the vocabulary of demographics and public finance is used precisely.

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