Writing Task 2 · Two-part question

Looking up medical advice online: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 two-part question essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 307 words
  • Two-part question
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many people now look for medical advice on the internet instead of visiting a doctor. Why do people do this? Is this a positive or negative development?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Two-part question

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    People search online because it is quick, free and private, but the trend is mainly negative.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Long waits for appointments, consultation costs and embarrassment drive people to search online.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Reliable sites can help with minor problems, but inaccurate information causes anxiety or dangerous delays.

  • →Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.
  • →One useful structure is a body paragraph for each question, using clear topic sentences and relevant support.
  • →Check that neither requested part is omitted or replaced with an answer to a different question.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model307 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

When people feel unwell, many now type their symptoms into a search engine before, or instead of, contacting a doctor. This habit is driven by convenience and by difficulties in accessing health services, and although it has some benefits, I believe it is mainly a negative development.

There are several reasons for this trend. In many places, it can take days or even weeks to get an appointment with a doctor, whereas an online search provides an instant answer at any time of day. The internet is also free, which matters to people who must pay for consultations or who cannot easily take time off work. In addition, some people feel embarrassed to discuss certain symptoms face to face and prefer the privacy of searching alone. Finally, the large number of health websites, forums and videos means that information is always readily available.

Looking for information online does have some advantages. Reliable websites run by health authorities can help people understand minor conditions, such as a common cold, and manage them at home, which reduces pressure on busy clinics. Well-informed patients may also ask better questions when they do see a doctor.

However, the disadvantages are more serious. Much of the health information online is inaccurate, out of date or written to sell products, and readers often cannot tell the difference. A person who searches for a headache may become convinced that they have a serious illness and suffer unnecessary anxiety, while another may dismiss a dangerous symptom as harmless and delay treatment. Self-diagnosis also ignores the physical examination and tests that doctors rely on.

In conclusion, people search online for medical advice because it is quick, free and private. While trustworthy sources can be useful for minor problems, the risk of misdiagnosis makes this trend more harmful than helpful, and it should never replace professional care.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions directly, with one paragraph for the reasons and two for the evaluation. The contrasting examples of overreaction and under-reaction show well-developed ideas, and the writer controls a range of complex structures with accuracy.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • symptoms

    signs of an illness that a person notices

  • consultations

    meetings with a doctor for advice or treatment

  • readily available

    easy to find or get

  • well-informed

    having a lot of useful knowledge

  • dismiss

    to decide that something is not important

  • self-diagnosis

    deciding for oneself what illness one has

  • misdiagnosis

    an incorrect decision about what illness someone has

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for health.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Looking up medical advice online"?+

Two-part question. Answer both questions directly and develop each answer.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 307 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by answering both questions directly, with one paragraph for the reasons and two for the evaluation. The contrasting examples of overreaction and under-reaction show well-developed ideas, and the writer controls a range of complex structures with accuracy.

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