Writing Task 2 · Advantages and disadvantages

Working holidays abroad for young people: IELTS Writing Task 2 sample answer

An IELTS Writing Task 2 advantages and disadvantages essay question with a Band 8-style sample answer, the plan behind it, the vocabulary that lifts it and what an examiner looks for.
  • 304 words
  • Advantages and disadvantages
  • General Training
  • 40 minutes

The question

Many young people now take a working holiday abroad, spending a year in another country while doing short-term jobs. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

About 40 minutes. Write at least 250 words.

Advantages and disadvantages

Plan before you write

  1. 1

    Your position

    The personal growth and skills gained from a working holiday outweigh the risks of low pay and delayed study.

  2. 2

    Paragraph 2

    Living and working abroad builds independence, language skills and cultural understanding that employers value.

  3. 3

    Paragraph 3

    Temporary jobs can be poorly paid and exploitative, and a year away may delay education, but preparation reduces these risks.

  • →Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.
  • →One useful structure is a paragraph for advantages and another for disadvantages, with explanations or examples.
  • →If asked for your opinion or whether advantages outweigh disadvantages, give and support a clear judgement; otherwise summarise both sides.

Model answer

Band 8-style sample essay

This AI-generated teaching example illustrates target features; it has not received an official IELTS band. Compare its ideas and structure with your own response.

Band 8-style model304 words · use the structure and vocabulary, not the sentences

It has become increasingly common for young adults to spend a year overseas, supporting themselves with temporary jobs as they travel. Although this experience carries some risks, I believe the advantages clearly outweigh the disadvantages.

The main benefit is personal growth. Living in an unfamiliar country forces young people to manage their own money, find accommodation and solve problems without the support of their families. A school leaver who spends a year picking fruit on farms or working in a café abroad usually returns more confident and independent than when they left. In addition, daily contact with colleagues and customers from different backgrounds improves language skills and builds an understanding of other cultures that cannot easily be gained from books. Employers often value these qualities, so a well-spent working holiday can strengthen a future job application rather than weaken it.

There are, however, genuine drawbacks. The jobs available to temporary visitors are often poorly paid and physically demanding, and some young workers are exploited by employers who know they are unlikely to complain. Furthermore, a year away may delay the start of a degree or a career, and some travellers find it hard to return to study once they have grown used to earning money. Being far from home can also be lonely, particularly if something goes wrong.

Even so, most of these problems can be reduced with sensible preparation. Researching employers, understanding basic employment rights and having a clear plan for returning home allow young people to enjoy the benefits while limiting the risks. The delay to education, meanwhile, is usually short and is often balanced by greater maturity and motivation afterwards.

In conclusion, while a working holiday can involve low wages and some uncertainty, the independence, cultural awareness and practical skills it develops make it a worthwhile experience for most young people.

Model commentary

Features to notice in this model

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by giving a clear judgement in the introduction and supporting it with balanced, well-developed paragraphs. The fourth paragraph explains why the disadvantages are outweighed rather than simply repeating them, and cohesive devices such as "even so" and "meanwhile" are used naturally.

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Vocabulary from the essay

  • overseas

    in or to a foreign country

  • school leaver

    a young person who has just finished school

  • genuine drawbacks

    real disadvantages

  • exploited

    treated unfairly so that someone else gains

  • employment rights

    the legal protections that workers have

  • maturity

    the quality of behaving in a sensible, adult way

  • worthwhile

    worth the time, money or effort spent

More words for this topic: IELTS vocabulary for travel and transport.

Frequently asked questions

What type of essay is "Working holidays abroad for young people"?+

Advantages and disadvantages. Discuss the benefits and drawbacks requested in the question.

How many words should an IELTS Writing Task 2 essay be?+

At least 250 words, in about 40 minutes. This sample is 304 words, written to fit that time with five minutes left to check grammar.

How is IELTS Writing Task 2 scored?+

On four criteria: task response, coherence and cohesion, vocabulary, and grammatical range and accuracy. Task 2 counts for twice as much as Task 1 in your Writing band.

What is the difference between a Band 6 and a Band 8 answer here?+

This sample aims to illustrate Band 8 features by giving a clear judgement in the introduction and supporting it with balanced, well-developed paragraphs. The fourth paragraph explains why the disadvantages are outweighed rather than simply repeating them, and cohesive devices such as "even so" and "meanwhile" are used naturally.

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